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I do a photo-shoot

After getting that feedback from an agent, I decided to celebrate by doing a photo-shoot of Cecylee to make my novel seem more real. The plan was to shoot some photos that I would like to see as the book cover for ONE SEED SOWN, TWO MURDERS REAPED.

I found Heather Hayes, a talented model who doesn’t just stand there with a blank stare. This lady has control over the expressions on her face. I thought she would be perfect for Cecylee. She found a friend, Whitney Arostegui, a photographer in New York. I found a gown and a wig, and we set off one glorious fall day to photograph in Prospect Park, Brooklyn, New York.

I was thrilled with the images I received a week later. My goal is to make the cover of the novel look so sumptuous that people will want to pick it up. I hope you agree.

Next: I register for the Unicorn Writers Conference

–Cynthia Haggard writes novels.  She is currently seeking representation for ONE SEED SOWN, TWO MURDERS REAPED, the Richard III story told from the point of view of his mother. For more on her creative writing, go to spunstories. (c) 2011. All rights reserved.

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I fix the MSS and send to another agent

As I mentioned in a recent post, I was extremely fortunate to find an agent who gave me valuable feedback. I read the 120 words she’d written carefully, and then spent a month fixing up the MSS. She told me she had problems relating to the main characters, because I’d written my novel in limited 3rd. So I thought about what I should do. Should I go through my 120,000-word MSS, and change it to first person? Should I write in present tense or past?

My novel is written in four books. The first book deals with Cecylee’s childhood, the second, her love-affair with the archer, the third about her husband’s political struggles with the King of England, and the fourth is about her life as an old woman. It seemed to me that each book demanded a different treatment.

Accordingly, I re-wrote the first book in first person present, to get that fresh voice suitable for young girls. I re-wrote the second book in first person past, to get a more adult voice. The third book, I kept in 3rd-person limited, because the complexity of the material demanded that the story be told from more than one point of view. For the fourth book, I re-wrote it in first-person past to convey a feel for the past, which is where most old people are. Then, for good measure, I added in more interior monologue.

After all that work, I sent it to another agent. I am awaiting her verdict as I type this. (She has promised to get back to me after the holidays).

Next: I do a photo-shoot for Cecylee

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–Cynthia Haggard writes novels.  She is currently seeking representation for ONE SEED SOWN, TWO MURDERS REAPED, the Richard III story told from the point of view of his mother. For more on her creative writing, go to spunstories. (c) 2010. All rights reserved.

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I am referred to an agent

Getting into the Napa Valley Writers Conference was one of the best things that has happened to me. The workshop leader was kind enough to say that she thought my novel was ready to send out. Then she turned to me: “Do you have representation?”

At that precise moment, I was with the agent who didn’t want to sign a contract, but had offered to show it to a couple of editors.

“I’m not sure,” I replied. And then explained my situation. A few of my classmates nodded sympathetically (they had similar stories to tell). The workshop leader explained that sometimes relationships with agents could be murky, and it wasn’t always clear whether you had representation or not. This was news to me.

She took me aside later, and gave me the name of her agent. I didn’t hesitate. Within a week, I’d contacted the agent, telling her that I’d been referred by the workshop leader (a New York Times bestselling author).

The result was astonishing. The agent contacted me within a day, asking for a synopsis and the first 50 pages. Then I had to settle in for the inevitable wait. It was summer, and the agent was traveling.

I finally heard back from her 2 months after I’d sent the MSS. She told me that it didn’t click for her. However, she did spend the time to give me some feedback about what she thought wasn’t working. I am eternally grateful to her for taking the time to write me 120 important words.

NEXT: I fix up the MSS and send to another agent.

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–Cynthia Haggard writes novels.  She is currently seeking representation for ONE SEED SOWN, TWO MURDERS REAPED, the Richard III story told from the point of view of his mother. For more on her creative writing, go to spunstories. (c) 2010. All rights reserved.

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I almost get representation

After getting turned down by an agent at a top New York agency, another one almost immediately appeared. I dutifully sent in the MSS and hoped she wouldn’t take three months to give me an answer.

She didn’t. Instead, she said she’d like to represent me.

You can imagine how happy I was. “So,” I said to her over the telephone, “do you send me a contract?”

“No,” she said. “I don’t work like that. I’ll send it out to a couple of editors, and then if there’s some interest, I’ll represent you.”

I had attended many workshops with titles like How to Get Your Novel Published, and had never heard of an arrangement like this. But no-one else was beating down my door, so I agreed. At least, I told myself, you haven’t signed anything.

I heard nothing more for weeks. Finally, after some prodding, she admitted that she’d gotten no response from her friends in the editing business. But by that time, I’d attended the Napa Writers Conference, and found another agent.

Next: Getting Slammed, or How I got into Napa.

–Cynthia Haggard writes novels.  She is currently seeking representation for ONE SEED SOWN, TWO MURDERS REAPED, the Richard III story told from the point of view of his mother. For more on her creative writing, go to spunstories. (c) 2010. All rights reserved.

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