Moonrise 
Sunset
Day-part
Weekend
Day-clear
Starlight
Day-clean
Sunrise
Leaf-fall
Candle-mass
Mayday
Rainfall
Moonset
Windfall
–Cynthia Haggard writes poetry, novels and short pieces. During the day, she is a medical writer. For more about her medical writing services, go to clarifyingconcepts. For more on her creative writing, go to spunstories. (c) 2009. All rights reserved.
Recently joined this site and am now starting to network – in poetry genres. See http://www.writingsbystone.wordpress.com. I have a poem similar to this one and another titled Loose Threads (this latter one is on my sire, archived under miscellaneous). I authored more than 150 medical articles before retiring, so i understand the duality of your life.
I like the simple rhyme of your poem, the way it starts to gather momentum towards the end, and how it needs no more description for it to be understood,
http://agirlwithoutwings.wordpress.com/